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Jackooo
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Registered: 25th Jan 05
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22nd Jun 06 at 19:24   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote

What do people think of this?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v211/ianjackson/gentadvert.jpg
its an advert for a new 'soap' we had to create in my media classes, just trying to obtain some feedback etc things i could improve etc etc

[Edited on 22-06-2006 by Jackooo]
Robin
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Registered: 7th Jan 04
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22nd Jun 06 at 19:30   View Garage View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote

quote:
Originally posted by Jackooo
just trying to obtain some feedback etc things i could improve


the spelling

its Shenanigans

you oculd try to use proper polaroids as the outline? and the sellotape effect isnt transparent enough to look real (but you might not have wanted it to look real?)
Jackooo
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22nd Jun 06 at 19:36   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote

spelling doh!!!

yeah i have done it again with the tape off and it looks abit better!!

anymore suggestions?
dave17
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23rd Jun 06 at 15:26   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote

since when does tape have a black outline

 
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