AndyKent
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Designed this for myself over the last few days. Ignoring all the text in the middle (filler), would like peoples opinions on the design......
http://www.aeroarchive.co.uk/ae/
Also, got a bit stuck at the end.........I'd like a full width black footer bar to put contact details in, but can't manage to position it without having it fixed. Fine when there is not enough text, not good when there is too much.
Cheers
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drax
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Its nice, clean.
I suggest you dont do such a harsh gradient tho, gradients should be subtle, change the grey to just lighter than the black you have used and it will be much nicer, changing the black text to white
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Steve
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i think the orange text should be white
imo
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AndyKent
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Cheers drax, just trying that now.
I like the orange, trying to stick two a couple of colours else it'll just go black and white.
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drax
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http://kuler.adobe.com/
Good site for seeing colour combinations
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AndyKent
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Not gone too dark on the grey, but a good improvement now I compare it to the original
http://www.aeroarchive.co.uk/ae2/
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AndyKent
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Changed it again now, different from the starting point
Any more opinions?
http://www.aeroarchive.co.uk/ae2/
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Steve
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can we comment on spelling mistakes?
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AndyKent
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Can if you like, but I just chucked most of the text in to fill the space....didn't check any of it TBH, especially since the rest of the site is yet to be created.
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AndyKent
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Well, gone full circle and started a new design altogether.
Anyone got any thoughts on this?
http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/9287/autodesign2xa8.jpg
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Bram
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It now looks like you've made it through a wizard?????
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AndyKent
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Honestly I haven't, made it from scratch but thats not the answer I was hoping for
Back to square one........
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drax
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Good try and good concept mate, but the things themselves are too harsh, you need to practise balance, continuity and repetition
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