jeff8png
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i've been designing a corsasport diary for a uni (graphic design) project. here are 3 cover ideas. i would greatly appreciate feedback. let me know what you think. what do you like? what dont you like? positioning? colours? image use? text?
cheers peeps
[Edited on 15-03-2006 by jeff8png]
[Edited on 25-04-2006 by jeff8png]
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Butler
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I like the bottom one, but a corsasport diary? What the...
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Rob_Lee
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3rd one...
bit of an obvious question to be honest!
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SXi_Tim
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Definately the one with beardys corsa on it, looks
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CCA
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The third one without a doubt
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Kyle T
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Beardys
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Impreza WRX STi
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langey
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number 3, but does beardy know your using his pic?
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PainZ
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I would be careful using the third one... you might have copyright prob..
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Mark Petty
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quote: Originally posted by langey
number 3, but does beardy know your using his pic?
don't start one of these arguments again
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Rob_Lee
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haha sue the coont!
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Carl
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its his uni project, hardly doing it for personal gain, probably a good idea to ask Beardy but he would have to be a bit of a cunt to kick off about it really.
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Doug
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Why a diary?!
!st or 3rd one IMO
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jeff8png
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yes, i thought about that problem. i plan on asking beardy, shouldnt be a problem though imo. its not for commercial use to gain money also.
the project is a typography brief in which we have to design a diary that caters for a particular interest or enthusiasm i hold. i havent done so much car related work lately so thought i'd give this a go.
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1.2-Ls-Corsa
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LIKE THE LITTLE TOUCH OF THE EXHAUST IN THE 1ST ONE IN THE BOTTOM LEFT. THINK YOU SHOULD PUT THAT ON THE BOTTOM ONE IN SAME PLACE
woops caps sorry ppl am at work.
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SXi_Tim
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yeah when im at work i get permanent caps lock too
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Carl
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i noticed the exhaust too, nice touch.
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Brett
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The fonts "zeros" look shite, you should make the centre holes as one without the split if you get me. I thought it was 2886 at first glance
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jeff8png
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yes, i agree with you on that. i don't think the star (dot on 'i') works very well with the font either, or with corsasport tbh. i'll do a couple more covers later. i'm just doing some of the pages at the moment.
thanks for comments, keep them coming
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RKS
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i like the first one as its a std corsa, but how about the first one with the rear of a corsa on the back!
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Adam_B
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1st or 2nd, its a corsasport diary not a beardy diary
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Brett
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quote: Originally posted by Adam_B
1st or 2nd, its a corsasport diary not a beardy diary
But you can't deny it looks ace, 1st one is far too bland
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mwg
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3rd one looks the best. Quite like the 2nd one too
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jeff8png
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yes adam_b, another thing i was thinking about. but that kind of rules any photography out. another idea was black (?) background with big vaux badge - like my avatar.
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Simon
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the third does look best but then its really the photo that makes it which you didnt take so would you get marks for that? dont you need to do a bit more of your own work on it?
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Steve
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Beardy id demand a free car bra if i was you
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