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Im doing a drawing as a birthday present as i have no money but dont want to just say that and not bother with anything so. simple really can you tell what this is ment to be does it look alright any parts that i could change? etc helpfull advice please
[Edited on 26-01-2011 by Twitch]
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luciaadr
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Optimus Prime, through the eyes of Picasso?
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Whittie
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I don't think its very good, sorry.
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DannyB
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Your Corsa after a fire
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Twitch
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yeh see i didnt think that either. not really been happy with it so might have to start again ^_^
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alan-g-w
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I'm sorry mate, got to agree with Whittie. Ten times better than I could do but it's not great, I'm no artist but it could do with some shadow.
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IvIarkgraham
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i'd be pissed off if i got given that
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Russ
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this will t-cut out?
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DannyB
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Who was it for, a child relative?
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Whittie
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Try doing some deeper, more prominent lines, for the main outline of it.
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adiohead
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print this out and say you did it:
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Lawrah
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Since I'm picasso would u like me to try? Lol
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Twitch
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tbf i might jsut start again lol. got a few weeks befor i actually have to give it to them as a present so can do many attempts. and by far not my best work which is a bit of a kick in the teeth.
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Twitch
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quote: Originally posted by Lawrah
Since I'm picasso would u like me to try? Lol
as nice as the offer is laura. its not really the same if i just gave them a picture. anyone can go buy one or a get a friend to do one. thought i'd put some effort in for once and give them something from me
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DannyB
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If we're all being honest here, as friends, then I would be fucking gutted if I got a drawing for my birthday. Tell the person who's birthday it is that you're skint and you'll get something when you have cash, lend some off your mum or dad? anything other than a drawing would be good
[Edited on 10-01-2011 by DannyB]
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Twitch
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i know where your comming from danny but i've also know this person for over 8 years now and i do know they will be happy with it. as they are not to fussed about material gift but more personal ones
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DannyB
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That's fair enough
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Twitch
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So took your thoughts and opinions seriously and decided to have another go. Not finished yet but does this look any better to you?
Sorry its not majorly clear only taken with my phone.
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Lawrah
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does look better.
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Twitch
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great. when i finish it i will post it up in all its glory lol
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Jamie-C
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Looks good, the detail is fantastic! You have skillz
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Shell
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That has 100% been traced. Sorry Twitch.
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Twitch
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It really hasnt. But im glad you think so
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sc0ott
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just get photoshop and use the original and then put on some sort of effect, such as pencil, waterpaints etc
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Twitch
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Well its pretty much done so thought i would show you the final product . nicest part of doing this is that while i draw i dont twitch at all for the first time since i was 7 i was sat still for over an hour
anyway here it is (taken on a phone)
My phone doesn't show all the detail but im pretty happy with it
heres a few others i did as well when i could
Done this last one about a year 2 years ago but always liked it
anyway what you think? good/bad would you be happy to recive it as a present if it was what you were into etc.
[Edited on 01-02-2011 by Twitch]
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