Tiger
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One of a series I shot yesterday for a band. 2 flash heads used, 1 lead behind and above camera, one slave to right.
Dunno if the link will work, let me know if it doesnt appear.
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Phillips_91
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Nice shot but the bright yellow wheel attracts my attention rather than the people themselves
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Whittie
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Great shot, as said though i'd probably just sponge the yellow out a tad.
Works really well.
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AndyKent
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I'd be cropping out half the wheel and some of the top of the picture.
Its a decent atmospheric shot but they're tiny in the frame.
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Tiger
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To be honest, I just shot it leaving plenty of space for editorial. That space to the left will be toned down and used for text mostly. This is just the full frame, it'll be cropped and played with to suit in its final phase no doubt, i'm not involved with that though.
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Marc
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Same as everyones replies above, I didn't want to say anything as I'm no expert!
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Phillips_91
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i'm no expert either just saying what i saw
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nathy_87
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You need something like:
Took about 10mins on Photobucket.
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Whittie
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Phillips_91
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That looks better imo, but personally still feel theres too much wheel, the main focal point should be the band, but my attention is still drawn straight to the wheel
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nathy_87
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quote: Originally posted by Phillips_91
That looks better imo, but personally still feel theres too much wheel, the main focal point should be the band, but my attention is still drawn straight to the wheel
Like i say only doing all this in Photobucket.
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Whittie
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That looks shit
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Phillips_91
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just the crop would look better i think, the blurred edge looks wank IMO
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nathy_87
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ffs.
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Phillips_91
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just feel like theres too much blur
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nathy_87
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nathy_87
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quality has gone shit.
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Phillips_91
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I like that (other than the quality obv ) but lets not go there don't want to wind you up
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Tiger
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The side where the wheel is is for editorial, i.e. copy / text. Thats why its still in there, in the series of 30 images there are at least 5 with the same space to either side. If I was just shooting the images for use purely as images then I would have reframed them. i'll find an example of another in the series not intended for text.
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Tiger
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nathy_87
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Now that's a good picture.
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Brett
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quote: Originally posted by nathy_87
Like i say only doing all this in Photobucket.
Christ
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nathy_87
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Don't ask I was trying to focus it on the band.
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Brett
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Ah, thought you'd gone for the cataracts perspective mate.
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