am4nf
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o and fix the front wheel
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Daveskater
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My first reaction is that there's too much shading on the front wheel
Numberwang!
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I like you Dave, you are a man of men
Originally Whatapp'd by Neo
Dave's maybe capable of a drive-by cuddle
Look at my pictures
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d4za
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never noticed the front wheel until now, cheers for pointing it out
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BluKoo
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Are you american?
Lower than your "MOMS" nipples?
I agree with the comment about the shading, and the lights just look odd to me. Not enough contrast.
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d4za
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now this is my final (i think) entry for this comp.
Daza
[Edited on 23-01-2009 by d4za]
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Daveskater
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That's more like it mate
Numberwang!
Originally posted by AlunJ
I like you Dave, you are a man of men
Originally Whatapp'd by Neo
Dave's maybe capable of a drive-by cuddle
Look at my pictures
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d4za
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lets hope i get more than 1 vote this time around then, spent too much time on this 'chop.
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BluKoo
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Still... whats the deal with "moms" nipples?
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JonnyJ
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Lower than your moms nipples
Its like reading Fast Car from '99 all over again
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d4za
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quote: Originally posted by BluKoo
Still... whats the deal with "moms" nipples?
spell it as i say it mate
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Daveskater
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quote: Originally posted by d4za
lets hope i get more than 1 vote this time around then, spent too much time on this 'chop.
Same, not spent as much time on this as the C3 but still hoping for more than 1 vote
Edit: I think I've finished now
LEt me know if there's any glaringly obvious mistakes that I've missed.
[Edited on 23-01-2009 by Daveskater]
[Edited on 23-01-2009 by Daveskater]
Numberwang!
Originally posted by AlunJ
I like you Dave, you are a man of men
Originally Whatapp'd by Neo
Dave's maybe capable of a drive-by cuddle
Look at my pictures
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Seany
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done with this one
[Edited on 23-01-2009 by Seany]
[Edited on 24-01-2009 by Seany]
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N3CRO
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Dave, the rear wheel looks odd and did you forget to 'depo' the other light or is it just the way the pic looks?
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am4nf
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aye dave rear wheel looks like its got some camber either that or its buckled and uv forgot a light
daza when i said about the front wheel i ment the white outline/ rough selection of it need to sort that out.
and seany i think that looks amazin but im not keen on the chunky splitter lol
[Edited on 24-01-2009 by am4nf]
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am4nf
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just noticed another thing on daves the front tyre looks like its split in two along with the alloy
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d4za
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the white outline/rough selection you can see is just because of how much it has been resized to fit the image, when i open the larger image up in PS it looks fine.
daza
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Seany
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i was trying to make the splitter look like a steimetz one
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Daveskater
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quote: Originally posted by TheNobleOne
Dave, the rear wheel looks odd and did you forget to 'depo' the other light or is it just the way the pic looks?
I thought I got the rear wheel to line up with the original tyre, maybe not quite perfect then I did do the other light, but didn't do too much because of all the reflections. It has been desaturated and darkened a bit though, it probably could do with a bit more though.
quote: Originally posted by am4nf
just noticed another thing on daves the front tyre looks like its split in two along with the alloy
I knew I'd forget to do that Thanks for reminding me It's because of how I lowered it.
Numberwang!
Originally posted by AlunJ
I like you Dave, you are a man of men
Originally Whatapp'd by Neo
Dave's maybe capable of a drive-by cuddle
Look at my pictures
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Seany
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been messing around again , opinions?
[Edited on 24-01-2009 by Seany]
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am4nf
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keep the other 1
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BluKoo
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quote: Originally posted by am4nf
keep the other 1
You joking? That one looks better. Very nicely done seany
Edit: you just need to get rid of the original background through the window.
[Edited on 24-01-2009 by BluKoo]
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Calum
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I think that looks pretty good Seany. Your work's definitely improving
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am4nf
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and fix the shading underneath the rear wheel
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Seany
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Yeah it was just a quick muck about, think I'm going to tidy it up and keep it though. Cheers for the comments guys
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Daveskater
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Sorted the wheel thing, I think that the rear wheel s fixed but can't decide. Literally only rotated it a couple of degrees. Also whacked the brightness up a tad on the wheels, think they look better white 4th edit - darkened the other headlight a bit more as well.
[Edited on 24-01-2009 by Daveskater]
Numberwang!
Originally posted by AlunJ
I like you Dave, you are a man of men
Originally Whatapp'd by Neo
Dave's maybe capable of a drive-by cuddle
Look at my pictures
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