will_doyle
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Matt L
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Is there dust on your lens/sensor? (on the firts pic theres like 5 or 6 marks on it in the sky.
Quite like number one but second one doesnt really do anything for me though.
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Neo
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Mirror what Matt's said really
First one would be good but is so dirty ruins it
Second doesnt do much for me, cropped to tight and part of the phonebox is desaturated (top right corner)
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alan-g-w
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I've got no other criticism other than you said 'a few pictures' when it's really a couple.
ok.
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Jenko_Sport
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What camera you using and equipment Will?
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will_doyle
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Thanks for the replys
Nikon D40x
18-55mm lens
and a standard tri-pod
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will_doyle
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I think there might of been dust on the lens
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Scotty_B
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1st shots nice but the second isn't brilliant.
The colour select would work better if only the red was showing inside and outside the phonebox.
Bit like mine from a few years back:
Also broke the 'thirds' rule which makes it work I think.
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Simon
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First pic is nice apart from dust marks. Second pic I don't really like, more of a personal opinion but I think this is such an overdone technique now, especially with phone boxes, London buses etc. I think it needs to be quite an original scene to pull it off.
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IvIarkgraham
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wheres that first one will im sure ive been there
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will_doyle
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quote: Originally posted by IvIarkgraham
wheres that first one will im sure ive been there
Budleigh
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