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Author Some Constructive Criticism Please?
ed
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20th Feb 10 at 20:48   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote

Just knocked this together for my dad today. I'm not very happy with the menu on the left, seems to not quite be there in my opinion. Any ideas?

http://www.adsum-healthcare.co.uk/the-hernia-clinic/
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20th Feb 10 at 20:56   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote

Yeah i think the menu needs to be abit more "out there" and also how about capital letters on all the headings and links?
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20th Feb 10 at 21:10   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote

Good shout on the capitals. I didn't even try it out as I have a bit of a lower case obsession at the moment.
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20th Feb 10 at 21:11   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote

Yeah the menu could do with being further towards the left IMO
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20th Feb 10 at 21:28   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote

And smaller? I think it might be a bit too big?
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i think you need a few more images, they are all just big blocks of text and nothing to break them up with
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21st Feb 10 at 10:01   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote

The content isn't online yet, have you noticed that it's all in Latin

I think there will be your standard gay stock images in with the text once it's all been written up.
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HAHA no i didnt read it just did a link check and looked at content
i think the link bar could be thinner and maybe maje the whole with the link rather than just the text
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Made the menu thinner. Shifted it all to the left a bit. Extended the fade on the main menu. Changed the font of the menu and the titles and underlined the menu items.

I'm happier with it now
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Other than moving the menu to the left a bit I think that looks spot on
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21st Feb 10 at 12:16   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote

Thanks
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Just found another reason why Windows XP is shit. It renders fonts appallingly
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If I were you I'd squeeze the address and contact details under the main logo at the top of the page - make them more obvious like.

I'd also loose the 'valid code' and website by bits. Pretty irrelevant to your audience.

Maybe think about loosing some height from the top image too - making it thinner would shorten the whole page and mean less scrolling.

 
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