A2H GO
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Im not a designer etc but my local gym have asked me to deign them a logo. Would someone be able to give me their email address so that i can send the JPEG to have it hosted on here(as i cant get on hosting sites at work)
I'd like your thoughts and feedback.
The name of the gym is 'Zion'.
[Edited on 29-03-2010 by CorsAsh-Sport]
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DaveyLC
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Is it Iron like a Lion?
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Welsh Dan
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This coat Davey. Is it yours?
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Dan
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Looks ok, but looks very rough around the edges
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A2H GO
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Maybe its how ive saved it, its not like that on my laptop at home. The guy at the top is suposed to look like a 'Z', maybe it needs a bit of tweaking.
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a_j_mair
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i would shorten his arm to look more like a Z
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SetH
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Take it its a juicer gym with the "health and strength" motto?
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DaveyLC
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If I was you I'd remove the shadow and 3D to make it a bit more contemporary.
[Edited on 29-03-2010 by DaveyLC]
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A2H GO
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quote: Originally posted by SetH
Take it its a juicer gym with the "health and strength" motto?
TBF yes its full of meatheads, no matter how pleasing to the eye i make the logo, the gym is never going to attract women.
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A2H GO
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quote: Originally posted by DaveyLC
If I was you I'd remove the shadow and 3D to make it a bit more contemporary.
Cheers Dude, does look better that.
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AndyKent
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I prefer your original tbh. Daveys one looks very plain and boring.
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RichR
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quote: Originally posted by AndyKent
I prefer your original tbh. Daveys one looks very plain and boring.
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Whittie
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quote: Originally posted by LiVe LeE
quote: Originally posted by AndyKent
I prefer your original tbh. Daveys one looks very plain and boring.
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A2H GO
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quote: Originally posted by AndyKent
I prefer your original tbh. Daveys one looks very plain and boring.
They gym are on about printing the Logo onto T-Shirts etc, or maybe just the small man, so the 3D wouldnt work too well i supose.
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AndyKent
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On a sign/leaflet/flyer or whatever I'd have the full version with the 3d dude.
On tshirts and stuff I'd just go for the text and grey lines - loose the guy. Get the text in big letters across the back of a shirt would look great.
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DaveyLC
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quote: Originally posted by CorsAsh-Sport
quote: Originally posted by DaveyLC
If I was you I'd remove the shadow and 3D to make it a bit more contemporary.
Cheers Dude, does look better that.
I've got a vector version too
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