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Tiger
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4th Mar 12 at 20:00   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
One of a series I shot yesterday for a band. 2 flash heads used, 1 lead behind and above camera, one slave to right.



Dunno if the link will work, let me know if it doesnt appear.
Phillips_91
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5th Mar 12 at 13:29   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
Nice shot but the bright yellow wheel attracts my attention rather than the people themselves
Whittie
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5th Mar 12 at 15:00   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
Great shot, as said though i'd probably just sponge the yellow out a tad.

Works really well.
AndyKent
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5th Mar 12 at 15:58   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
I'd be cropping out half the wheel and some of the top of the picture.

Its a decent atmospheric shot but they're tiny in the frame.
Tiger
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5th Mar 12 at 17:13   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
To be honest, I just shot it leaving plenty of space for editorial. That space to the left will be toned down and used for text mostly. This is just the full frame, it'll be cropped and played with to suit in its final phase no doubt, i'm not involved with that though.
Marc
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5th Mar 12 at 20:06   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
Same as everyones replies above, I didn't want to say anything as I'm no expert!
Phillips_91
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5th Mar 12 at 20:10   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
i'm no expert either just saying what i saw
nathy_87
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6th Mar 12 at 13:34   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
You need something like:



Took about 10mins on Photobucket.
Whittie
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6th Mar 12 at 13:35   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
Phillips_91
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6th Mar 12 at 14:19   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
That looks better imo, but personally still feel theres too much wheel, the main focal point should be the band, but my attention is still drawn straight to the wheel
nathy_87
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6th Mar 12 at 15:46   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Phillips_91
That looks better imo, but personally still feel theres too much wheel, the main focal point should be the band, but my attention is still drawn straight to the wheel




Like i say only doing all this in Photobucket.
Whittie
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6th Mar 12 at 15:50   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
That looks shit
Phillips_91
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6th Mar 12 at 15:57   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
just the crop would look better i think, the blurred edge looks wank IMO
nathy_87
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6th Mar 12 at 15:59   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
ffs.
Phillips_91
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6th Mar 12 at 16:03   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
just feel like theres too much blur
nathy_87
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nathy_87
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6th Mar 12 at 16:05   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
quality has gone shit.
Phillips_91
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6th Mar 12 at 21:41   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
I like that (other than the quality obv ) but lets not go there don't want to wind you up
Tiger
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6th Mar 12 at 22:10   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
The side where the wheel is is for editorial, i.e. copy / text. Thats why its still in there, in the series of 30 images there are at least 5 with the same space to either side. If I was just shooting the images for use purely as images then I would have reframed them. i'll find an example of another in the series not intended for text.
Tiger
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nathy_87
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7th Mar 12 at 08:24   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
Now that's a good picture.
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7th Mar 12 at 09:14   View Garage View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
quote:
Originally posted by nathy_87


Like i say only doing all this in Photobucket.

Christ
nathy_87
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7th Mar 12 at 09:20   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
Don't ask I was trying to focus it on the band.
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Ah, thought you'd gone for the cataracts perspective mate.
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