Alex_Rally
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Registered: 6th Sep 09
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i really dont wanna sell the car ive spent the last year making 
http://www.ebay.co.uk/itm/221011369170?ssPageName=STRK:MESELX:IT&_trksid=p3984.m1555.l2649
what do people think of the advert, it took me like 40 mins or so to write lol
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corsa-torque
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Not a bad write up, but seen better tbh..
Too many LOL's your selling a car not on Facebook.
If I wanted to buy a car I'd want to drive it not listen to it idle?
Race plugs?? Is there such a thing?
How can the brakes be fitted with more than one set of pads??
Headlights with Indicators build it? Built in perhaps?
Seel? - sell
I'm put so much time in? -I've
Anotherone? - another one
Sold shell? - solid shell
No mention of damage? Dent in door??
Don't mean to sound like I'm picking but you have asked for opinions and I thought you'd like the advert correct.
[Edited on 27-04-2012 by corsa-torque]
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mex
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i would never put "lol" in a car advert, also putting the prices such as 3700quid would put me off,
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Corsa_Sport21
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Location: Leven, Fife. Drives : 205 GTi
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Been for sale for about 10 days has it not.....
http://www.corsasport.co.uk/board/viewthread.php?tid=633124
Struggling to see how its even close to a rally car though, and i think you will be lucky to get anywhere near the asking price. And the listing title is a bit over-kill. Can see where you are going with it and why you have done it, but its non of those things apart from a Corsa Sport X16XE.
Also, best corsa rally car around??
[Edited on 27-04-2012 by Corsa_Sport21]
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reecegsi
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2750 tbh you could get a c20let with better spec for that price no way will you get that but it has got good bits but still couldnt break and make that
more realiatic price better description and it should be sold
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silvercorsabee
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its a for sale add not a english essaY!
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djgritt
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Overpriced IMO.
Sorry to say that too.
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Corsa_Scotty
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Best off breaking it tbh. more of a chance making money back that way i know i'd be intrested in a few bits
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Alex_Rally
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i was abit tipsy when typing the advert out, so i think al go and check all the spelling again, thanks for the ideas lads.
il go and make a few adjustments to it.
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Alex_Rally
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some good comments there chaps, i think il leave the advert on ebay for a couple weeks and if no bites il strip it for bits, i was hoping i wouldnt have to do that, as theres so so so many bits lol will take for ever lol
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Alex_Rally
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well ive put an advert for breaking it now , gonna see if i get much interest.
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