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LeeM

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Registered: 26th Sep 05
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23rd Jun 12 at 18:29

I'm applying for Blackpool pleasure beach for the summer, crap job but loads of hours which is all I want.
Now it's a single A4 page that asks for name, address, phone and email, what hours you can work and then "in 20 words or less, tell us why you should be part of our dynamic team?"

I'm struggling to say anything worthwhile about myself in such short space and without the generic adjectives like trustworthy and adaptable

Anyone any ideas to get my brain working?

CORSA NUT

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23rd Jun 12 at 18:51

Maybe have a look on there website and maybe there's some quotes or buzz words they've used?

Worth a shot

Marc

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23rd Jun 12 at 19:00

Say you watched Adventureland and want to pull a Kristen Stewart-a-like. Maybe.

LeeM

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23rd Jun 12 at 19:08

"I'm awesome, I'm skint, and I've watched adventureland. You know you want me."

sc0ott

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23rd Jun 12 at 19:20

Say youve watched beverley hills cop and you now know how to climb ferris wheels

N3CRO

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23rd Jun 12 at 19:46

quote:
Originally posted by LeeM
"I'm awesome, I'm skint, and I've watched adventureland. You know you want me."

taylorboosh

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23rd Jun 12 at 19:56

quote:
Originally posted by N3CRO

quote:
Originally posted by LeeM
"I'm awesome, I'm skint, and I've watched adventureland. You know you want me."

LeeM

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23rd Jun 12 at 19:59

I might just put that, see if it gets me noticed. It's between that and "I'm trustworthy, hardworking and adaptable. I'm highly motivated and am willing to go the extra mile to get the job done." which is far too generic and probably almost identical to what's on 90% of the forms they get

taylorboosh

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23rd Jun 12 at 20:03

Worth a bash imo

LeeM

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23rd Jun 12 at 20:12

Either that or "I'm a wild mouse, I'll cause an avalanche and ice blast on to your team to start a revolution!"
They're all names of rides there, is that too cheesy an attempt to get noticed?

[Edited on 23-06-2012 by LeeM]

_Allan_

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23rd Jun 12 at 20:22

You're a big one

LeeM

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23rd Jun 12 at 20:35

Eh?

Fro

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23rd Jun 12 at 20:39

Will make them chuckle, either that or want to puke from the cringe worthyness

Would get you noticed though.

LeeM

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23rd Jun 12 at 20:44

That's my thinking, I just don't want it to be another application with the same old shit

Phillips_91

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23rd Jun 12 at 20:49

i'd go with the first one tbh, its funny, second one is just too cheesy

taylorboosh

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23rd Jun 12 at 21:03

Is it that hard to get a min wage job nowadays

LeeM

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23rd Jun 12 at 21:04

Yep

taylorboosh

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23rd Jun 12 at 21:18

McDonald's?

LeeM

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23rd Jun 12 at 21:20

Already applied, Waiting to hear back. Worked there years ago though so dunno if that will go for or against me

taylorboosh

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23rd Jun 12 at 21:22

For id imagine mate, good luck

LeeM

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23rd Jun 12 at 21:30

Just hard work, my work experience is office based n finance. I'm a qualified mechanic and I'm doing an engineering degree.
Im hardly an ideal candidate for jobs like this

[Edited on 23-06-2012 by LeeM]

Ste

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23rd Jun 12 at 23:18

quote:
Originally posted by LeeM then "in 20 words or less, tell us why you should be part of our dynamic team?

Politely inform them that the correct grammatical way to say that is "20 words or fewer

I would rather lose by a mile because i built my own car, than win by an inch because someone else built it for me.

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